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1. Travis J I Corcoran says:

   December 2, 2019 at 3:34 pm

   Leave bug reports in the comments, please.

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   From @haunt_fox

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2. Larry says:

   December 2, 2019 at 4:01 pm

   I posted these in the previous bug thread a while back.
   “Sargent John Hayes” -> “Sergeant John Hayes” (haunt_fox also reported)
   “Oh, come on LT.” I think there’s a missing line of dialogue from the lieutenant right before this.
   “CalTech” is typically written “Caltech” and is far from Palo Alto. Perhaps Stanford was intended?
   “smashed it’s battering ram” -> “its” (haunt_fox also reported)
   “even if they got” rest of sentence is missing (haunt_fox also reported)
   “tells me that that Mike has” -> “tells me that Mike has”
   “asked me to to do” -> “asked me to do”
   “got fins one one end.” -> “got fins on one end.”

   Also, this image was omitted from the comment above.
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3. John Walker says:

   December 2, 2019 at 7:05 pm

   I have omitted ones which were reported by Larry in the comment above.

   Location 474: “The APC gunned its engine, and *tired* spun…”
   Should be “tires”.

   Location 475: “He’d wanted to do this without *blood shed*.”
   This is a matter of personal choice, but “bloodshed” as one word is the more common usage.

   Location 485: “…forced himself to *breath*.”
   Should be “breathe”.

   Location 589: “…and then the crumpled fell off the hood…”
   The crumpled what? Perhaps “crumpled door” or some such was intended.

   I enjoyed the tip of the hat to _Starship Troopers_ at location 111.

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4. Jared Burrell says:

   December 3, 2019 at 1:14 am

   Location 268
   “facility the”
   Comment: make it “facility until the”

   Location 474
   “tired”
   Comment: maybe “tires”

   Location 570
   the
   Comment: it should be “then”

   Location 589
   “crumpled”
   Comment: crumpled what?

   Location 618
   “forearm arm”
   Comment: redundant?

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5. John Walker says:

   December 25, 2019 at 2:58 pm

   Location 228: “De *Opresso* Liber”
   Should be “De oppresso liber” (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/De_oppresso_liber). Also, since it’s a Latin phrase, it should probably be in italics.

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