the College Kids…and Ewoma!
I finished up on the John-and-Dogs thread, got briefly distracted into the John-and-the-raid-on-the-PK-facility, and am now firmly ensconced in the second pass through the novel:...
another visual diff
Today’s revision. Click to embiggen....
another rewrite example: show don’t tell
Time for another rewrite example. Here’s the original: == 7 Aug 2064 John had finally stopped hustling Mike, Javier and the rest of the group...
diffs!
Skipping back a few days, I see that Chapter 66 wasn’t rewritten from scratch, so it provides decent grist for the diff mill. Old in...
the book is growing
I’m about 80% of the way through the rewrite of the John-and-Dogs thread of the novel. Good news: A lot of awkward writing is going...