Month: November 2012

This is one of my favorite scenes in the book. It didn’t require too much cleanup in this pass. Not like the following scene (the...

I got a really late start (around 3:30pm), but in just 3.5 hours I had a pretty good editing session. Deleted 1k words, wrote 1k...

A few people told me that the sub plot with the hackerspace kids should stretch over more than one scene. I’ve re-outlined the second book,...

I think I may have blogged this scene again. I worked it over a bit more today, as part of 6,000 words of revision. ==...

As you may or may not recall, draft three is trying to accomplish three things: rearranging scenes so that the book keeps all of the...

Dogs – dozens of them – pressed close around Blue, Max, and Duncan. In privacy, with no humans present, they felt free to sniff the...