chapter: John and the Dogs react to 2nd loss of sat coms
{{{*** 81: John == 2064: Icarcus Crater, Lunar Farside Duncan kneeled on the lunar graveled and rolled up the tent’s sun shield. John walked past...
chapter: John learns about the augmented reality game
Here’s draft 4 of chapter 76 where John learns about the augmented reality game. This is a fun little scene where we take a break...
YA novels, YA spin offs
SF author Rahul Kanakia writes http://blotter-paper.com/2013/04/19/thinking-about-moving-away-from-writing-novel-length-adult-science-fiction-and-fantasy …more and more like the idea of being a YA [ science fiction ] writer. The field feels a...
new scene from book 1, Act 1: Darcy is a private person
A quick refresher. Modern narrative theory says that all books have three acts: Act 1: introduce the characters, make the conflict clear Act 2: the...
four revisions is too many?
Looks like folks disagree with my thoughts on how many revisions are necessary: http://accordingtohoyt.com/2013/04/02/3934/#comment-67095 TJIC: …I’m on my fourth draft… kilteDave: Fourth draft? Out of...