revised scene: after the prison break
== 1 sep 2064: the Deladrier, in elliptical orbit around the Moon Darcy floated above the cockpit floor and pulled herself through the open door...
revised scene: prison break
This is one of my favorite scenes from the novel. I hope you like it too. Who doesn’t like Big Damn Heroes? *** 137 ==...
revised scene: gravel boats
This is one of my favorite scenes in the book. It didn’t require too much cleanup in this pass. Not like the following scene (the...
revised scene: Mike meets the Dogs
I got a really late start (around 3:30pm), but in just 3.5 hours I had a pretty good editing session. Deleted 1k words, wrote 1k...
new scene : Atlanta Hackspace
A few people told me that the sub plot with the hackerspace kids should stretch over more than one scene. I’ve re-outlined the second book,...
revised scene: planning Doolittle’s Raid (v2.0)
I think I may have blogged this scene again. I worked it over a bit more today, as part of 6,000 words of revision. ==...
new scene : 40,000 space suits
As you may or may not recall, draft three is trying to accomplish three things: rearranging scenes so that the book keeps all of the...
new scene: the Dogs during the PK assault
Dogs – dozens of them – pressed close around Blue, Max, and Duncan. In privacy, with no humans present, they felt free to sniff the...
teaser: the PK snatch team
The scene: Earth forces are assaulting Aristillus and a PK snatch team is trying to capture the Boardroom Group. John is back from his hike...
why bother using a private land registry in anarchy?
A few e-friends that I met via Prometheus Unbound and I chat in a private Google Group about anarcho-capitalism and writing. I was questioned about...