Month: October 2012

teaser: the PK snatch team

The scene: Earth forces are assaulting Aristillus and a PK snatch team is trying to capture the Boardroom Group. John is back from his hike...

teaser: the invasion is on

Dewitt’s slate beeped as a pop-up from the airlock administration interface appeared. “Remote Maintenance Request: tier 2 admin attempt to set state to ‘offline’. Approve?”...

teaser: the HMS Beagle

Blue nodded. “Checklist four.” John called it up in his display. “Checklist four, bullet point one. AG to three. Ramp it up slowly, please.” Blue...

teaser: DIY project: home brew spaceship

Duncan cut in “What are you guys talking about?” Max said “Yeah, what ARE you talking about?” John pointed to the specifications of the old...

teaser: John and Rex are dead

A second daily sample: — Duncan spoke up. “I wonder if Rex’s hack worked?” Blue raised his eyebrows. “We’ll see soon enough.” Max reached down...

teaser: Dogs wait for John

I’m playing with the idea of posting one small snippet each day when I’m done with my daily 2,500 words of revision. Here’s my first:...

three revisions

Draft 1 was “getting a story down”. It ran to 160,000 words. Draft 2 was “fixing the huge plot holes, filling in missing bits, making...